Remove the 808s and heavy kicks. Keep just the hi-hats and the guitar loop to leave room for "sad" vocals.
A distorted, sliding 808 is essential. It should feel heavy but short (not too much decay).
Minor chords (i - VI - III - VII). Let the notes ring out to create a "lonely" space. 2. The Atmosphere (The "Sad")
Hard-hitting and "punchy" to cut through the soft melody.
A crisp, thin "rimshot" or a dry snare on the 2 and 4.